Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Alois -Kuroshitsuji- by Amnet Alois -Kuroshitsuji- by Amnet
Costume & Model: :iconkairisia:
Character: Alois Trancy from Kuroshitsuji II
Lense: Tamron SP AF 17-50mm f/2.8 XR Di II VC
Photography studio: [link]
Convention: Love2
Add a Comment:
Now this is an interesting piece. The colors you chose as well as the pose and position of the model were very well done.

I like how the butterflies on her chest and neck appear to be painted on (are they?) and the ones on her face and hair are more three dimensional.

The only problem I have with this is the eyes and the expression. I don't know what anime/game/whatnot this is supposed to be a portrayal of so take my advice with a grain of salt.

The contacts you chose were so unnaturally bright that they actually cheapened the image. They simply look too fake.

Again, I don't know what character you were trying to portray so I could be wrong. Perhaps that is exactly the right color for that character. I don't know. But from a casual third person perspective I would have gone a bit more subtle.

And as for the face; you're very pretty. And you have a lot of promise as a model/cosplayer.

However, you need to work a bit on your facial expression. It seemed a bit generic and expressionless in my opinion. Remember, modeling is much like acting. You're portraying a certain character. So keep that in mind.

Other than that, wonderful job!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
26 out of 27 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

Martychan96 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011
OMG You're so cute <3
cheese1815 Featured By Owner May 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:O awesome
Pemphredo Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful ♥
xAvaRoNx Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
I love It!!
xAvaRoNx Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
You are a perfect Alois cosplay! It's like he walked out of the picture! hehe
CrossAcademy22 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wow~ such a good looking Alois there~
I luv the eyes (they actually look almost like the real Alois's)
winkofthebutterfly Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Student Photographer
:meow: butterflies!!~
inochi0 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
troche te oczka jakies takie przeostrzone XD ale i tak jesteś mistrzunio
Kairisia Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter i wiesz, jak juz sie dal tym starym dziadom to potem przyszedl pajak.... XD dobra juz koncze ;* bardzo lubie twoje zdjecia i mam nadzieje ze wiecej razem popracujemy w przyszlosci :)
Sefi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
Śliczna fota ze śliczną Kasią <3 uwielbiam te motyle.
envylicious Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
piekne, uwielbiam efekt, jaki daly te motyle :heart: dla mnie zdjecie z fotostudia powinno miec wlasnie w sobie cos takiego, co nie sprawdziloby sie w przypadku zdjecia w plenerze czy jakiejs innej lokacji. tutaj sa to wlasnie te motylki. podejrzewam, ze przy fotce z tlem nie wygladaloby to tak fajnie bo to, co byloby dookola odwracaloby uwage, a tu sie skupiamy na samej postaci i tym, co na niej i jest fajnie :D
technicznie sie nie czepiam bo specjalistka ze mnie zadna, ale ladne, ostre, kolorki mniam, chociaz oczy bym troche mniej intensywne dala, za to wielbie, jak ~Monyaa wystylizowala tu peruke kasi i bede to powtarzac za kazdym razem :love:
Add a Comment:


Submitted on
April 20, 2011
Image Size
420 KB


2,828 (1 today)
134 (who?)

Camera Data

Canon EOS 40D
Shutter Speed
1/200 second
Focal Length
44 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Feb 13, 2011, 12:56:25 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
Sensor Size